My Opus

I have been working on all these songs below and nothing has come together like i have said. All these recordings are not polished by any means, i just threw the ideas out there. Obviously there are transition/timing/ problems and just plain mistakes. This particular song, i cant figure out, i put all the parts here, but they dont have transitions written yet so try to separate them in your mind. If anyone has ideas, they are welcome. I had a solo worked up at the end, and i batched it hardcore its not even funny. But im too lazy and dont care to rerecord. I just wanted to give a sample. Ignore everything after 3:30seconds in the video. Or just watch it more closely now that i pointed it out and laugh.